when
when I watch somthing, I dont want to keep clicking buttons over and over, get your timing right, and put some effort into your work.
when
when I watch somthing, I dont want to keep clicking buttons over and over, get your timing right, and put some effort into your work.
you're lazy
you need
Voice actors, really you find when your talking you have a buzz in the background a good voice actor will not only make anything you do from this point on better but also give more depth to your animations
paceing: rush rush rush rush, take a breath think about timing and such, there needs to be sometime before lines
story telling: Im not too sure if the robinhood story went like that...maybe im wrong.. but Im sure it was a little diffrent
Thanks, but I was actually TRYING to go fast when I spoke, and I was making a parody/satire, not an exact interpretation of the story. I wasn't going for accuracy. Thanks though, your review was beneficial, the main bad point in my voice acting I feel was my microphone, it's not studio quality.
Thanks again though, if I do make future submissions I'll definately have more voice actors.
very risky
You took a Big RIsk with such a simple joke....
and it really paid off well done grasshopper
but really I hope this dosnt get bogged/voted down by......fools...
You and me both friend...
gooD
I did like it and I see you must have taken alot form the pefect kirby flashs. I have voted 5 but next time try somthing more your own
Yeah, we got inspired by the PK-series alot. :P We'll try to improve 'till then.
wow
wow still in the portle and already on the front page... that is cool
I was quite amazed myself... like... what the heck? It didn't even get an award. The Fulps must've REALLY thought it was good...
Thanks for the feedback!
IT WAS so funny
Mariji why didnt I think of that? the fighting was perfect not over the top it was well made.
got to be a good rating
Thanx
your best one yet
your best one yet snice it too soonto bed asking for the next one I shall just say two thing
1. more jokes like in the first one, "thats a nice house"
and 2.
WELL DONE GOOD JOB
I will try to add more of my jokes in there. Like the whole Master Lamington thing.
MHAHAHAH
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